All Comments on 'Verschränkung'

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vrosej10vrosej10almost 15 years ago
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Nice. Esoteric and intellectual. What I expect from a Pushkine poem.

normal jeannormal jeanalmost 15 years ago
ol shrode's kitty

lives on and not. Different than the others I have read on the subject, but good. I agree about the last line, but have no suggestions for improvement.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyalmost 15 years ago
Enjoyed it

For me a litter box came to mind in the first stanza, but then the thought experiment took hold. Nice personification (felinization ?) of the subject. Not sure what, but something seems lacking to me in the last line.

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