All Comments on 'Visual Stimulation'

in the long held breath and moments of almost touch, the lingering wait for a kiss. There is an energy waiting to happen, waiting, waiting... very good. Erotica can be so much more that just an act, here you color it in the anticipation.

jim : )

after 16 years.

; )

very sexy and sensual

can almost see you squirming...

Thank you

...with longing and anticipation. Very, very well-done!

A good example of the difference between erotic and pornographic writing.

This poem titillates without the need to be graphic.

It does what a good poem should do,

drawing the reader along and helping one to create images

drawn out of personal history and feelings.

The words help "show" the experience as they "tell" the story.

A good erotic poem