All Comments on 'Wanna Play?'

just luv that game?

hehe..cute lil' write

enjoyed the chuckle

What I see here are two on the beach---but the skin scratches are nothing next to the sand (ow!)

direction for you...enjoyed your new perspective...blue

something good,

my stomach growls

as two parts fuck

and two parts lust

stir together

a hot thick cream

making steam

rise right off

the page.

great stuff RF.

curt

I like this one better of the two you posted today. This one sizzles.

A hot little piece ~ beachfront play at night in the presence of a cool little fire, warmed by the heat of two at play.

I do, now that I read this <bigrin> your poem stirred my passionate muse <smile (~_~)

Reality check - the comments and the score are more impressive than than the poem