- Non-Erotic Poetry
- War's Vision - 2
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereWar's Vision - 2
~Extraction~
Special troop in silence waiting
Only night, their sure friend;
Their "Mikey" in a bad way
Stretched out, he lays too still;
Relief, birds finally show ~
Light one.
Flight home in silence
Rotors hushed in mournful passing;
No muted high-fives back this time
Their "Mikey" gone on;
No more his light innocence
To lighten perpetual war.
The word is passed
Joe Franks' bird is down,
Swallowed in blue deep;
Others from his flight plucked out
Joe Franks never to be seen;
Their friends, these Special troops now know
There'll not be one detail to perform but two.
© Leon Brozyna 2005
- COMMENTS
sweet GA peachesover 18 years ago.....and with it,
came the reality that
touches home to often.
I have never been much into
the WAR issues as others
seem to only pass blame,
or leave the frustration
and anger to drift,
but you...
You hit hearts,..
and with your perspective-
shed another light/darkness
for the world to see..
Shine on Leon,
to do what YOU do.
-sGp-
Anonymousover 18 years agoThe two lines "No more his light innocence
To lighten perpetual war" add a special sombre overtone.
Too good, Leon! We can write erotica, but can we tell the truth!
My Erotic Taleover 18 years agowhen beaten, shot and plum wore out they must muster up more, like leon has extended another installment of war in poetry, nicely done leon.
