All Comments on 'Wasting Time'

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
*Smiles*

I saw it comin' my friend. Sometimes we weak humans forget everything but *the game*. Hope this did not happen to you.

Wonderful imagery here.

I loved the flow, and originality.

Great poem, gotta look a lil to *see this picture.

I love that in a poem.

imho~ *Smilin*

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
definitely....

like the originality here. it also seems to have a tinge of some dry humour too.......don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
DID YOU

Did you ever ask the question?

or didn't it really matter in the long run?

Tom CollinsTom Collinsabout 18 years ago
Isn't it funny...

how you can become so focused on something that it loses it's meaning? Like saying a word over and over until it stops being a word at all and is just a strange sound that you can't understand anymore. *kiss*

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