by DeepAsleep
first six lines grabbed me
followed it through
yeh I liked the rhythm
the flow and the laughter
but the question
that was asked
sadly went unanswered
this vignette of yours with the thoughts entwined. Cleverly designed images delivered with a swagger. Thanks
..."delivered with a swagger". Just be careful not to swagger when you're one beer short.
I found a fantastic poem. I think you should go back and steal the clock.
I hope you don't pay any attention to your voting scores, DA: I have had to use a new scale. Your worst get 4's from me despite the fact they are 6's compared with most of lit! Another remarkable offering.