by Selena_Kitt
You show the readers with details and wonderful images.
thanks
My comments on your poem are on the new poems thread in the poetry forum. I did not use the thermometer for rating.
this is wonderful.
those small details make the whole poem
Excellent work
Thank you
...is wonderful slice-of-life stuff, and not just watermelon slice. Liked this very much.
What kind of circumstance/no time to sort you out/your saliva is cool/and sticky on my chin/like watermelon/seeds in