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by RhymeFairy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
cool....

no hot. I loved the "more yous" thing. As a wax artisan

I loved the visuals and glow this gave me. sandspike

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Yum!

Your poem was mentioned in the new poem reviews today.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
wax?

I am unsure if I would like a wax job but I definetly enjoyed your poem (~_~)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
mmmm...yes

to a heated molten

mountain

to a rocky stiff

cocky.

Hi RhymeFairy, the above words resonated well with my taste of writing..really loved it, sooo fluid so sensual and a bit cheeky too ;-) and look at the plethura of poems you have submitted..i will dive into your pool again and again for sure..

"deep water" My first submission and what a fabulous welcome..thank you x

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