All Comments on 'We Are Still Breathing'

This is a powerful write. I loved the breaks that make one stop and let the meaning of the last line take focus in your mind.

thank you

du lac

The first time I read it, I have to say that I didn't care for it. But I read it again, and I started to see what you were trying to do. I still think there is something more you could do here, even though I'm not sure what it is. It just doesn't feel flesh-out enough, for lack of a better way of saying it. Almost like you were holding something back, if that makes sense.

Feels like a different look at the thoughts raised in "The Hand You've Been Dealt." It feels like a softer look here.