All Comments on 'We Dance'

and I really liked it then. And I like the way you resolved the meter issue in the last line. There's a typo ("you" should be "your," I think), but really that's no big deal at all. It's a lovely graceful poem. :-)

Your imagery made my imagination move before the words got there. That's good poetry.

Problems with the first line of the second stanza; not talking about the typo; I'm not someone who says "great" and then finds the chink in the armor. I think the line needs work. Still liked it very much.

Catching up on frequent contributors and liking what I see.