All Comments on 'We Need a Room'

I like this a lot. It is very playful, fresh, open, childlike, free-wheeling.

But the words "cock" and "fuck" strike me as all business.

In the flow of this poem, these words are sort of like tripping on a slightly raised square of concrete when you're out for a walk daydreaming. Their tone seems a little at odds with the feel this poem had for me.

Yikes... This IS hot! I love the use of poetry - so often gentle and mysterious (as in some of KinkyKaren's other work) - as a hard, aggressive form for those times when 2 people just need to fuck so bad! This poem really brings through the lust that can emerge between two people. Karen - let's get a room together!