All Comments on 'We Work. We Play. We Come and Go with Dick & Jane.'

by greenmountaineer

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
Do run, run.......

Ain't it fun ?

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 9 years ago
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Janet & John books were never like this!

todski28todski28over 9 years ago
is this a riff of a song?

the sonics of the final line seem to be from a familiar song that I cant quite place, you managed to freshen up a cliché big time here, gave me a small grin,

your rhyme in this piece is so smooth it highlights the piece without any forced stutters or pauses, nice work gm

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