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writing.

the last lines sealed it for me.

I have my own ideas what this is about and who it's for... but this:

~Awoken too soon

I catch my death

on the monitor

by mistake,

distracted

as

the heart pump

connects.~

can be taken in quite a few ways and is really an outstanding verse.

Thank you

very interesting

very different

this is a beautiful poem- nice economy of language and wonderful imagery.

Late reader- found it in the top lists!