Wet Fluorescence

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We stand in the shape of an apostrophe,
as we lock together.
Damp breathsweat lingers
in jade soundproofed air:
we hear only each other's breath –
cool on sucked earlobes.
Lured eyes scour down my coffee skin
like fingers, down to sculpture with licks of heat.
Layers lost,
we on our pedestal bed,
bleached light pooling on our shoulders,
palms becoming hard on soft.
Squeezing joints and childishly
clambering, sheer saliva shining on our necks.
We fumble intoxicated –
trying to fit hungry key into heart.
My red laid bare to glow,
his thrusting pink feint,
silk black slipping,
I grab.
Stirring repetition, I am
distanced from room and me,
focused on his cavernous eyes -
creating a manmade, industrial heartbeat.

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todski28todski28over 9 years ago
really enjoyed this

However the end jars for me.

Man made industrial heart beat seems to be too mechanical and not to fit the rest of the theme but up till that, you had it all going on.

May I ask what you mean by the title because I am missing that also. Thank you for the read