All Comments on 'Wet Fluorescence'

by Maeliana57

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todski28todski28over 9 years ago
really enjoyed this

However the end jars for me.

Man made industrial heart beat seems to be too mechanical and not to fit the rest of the theme but up till that, you had it all going on.

May I ask what you mean by the title because I am missing that also. Thank you for the read

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