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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 17 years ago
I thought...........

...........this conveyed the feeling of peacefull rememberance well but I do think this poem could be trimmed and pruned to a more tidy piece.

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
Poetry Forum

i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. - wildsweetone

(the 50% temp rating is so that it does not affect future ratings.)

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