All Comments on 'What do you mean too needy?'

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Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
this is a looong poem

and the rhyme scheme makes it feel even longer. It has its good points, but the rhyme isnt one of them. I think you could revamp this into something shorter and more concise and it would be pretty good, but that is just my honest opinion :rose:

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