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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Excellent poem

Nice job.

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
An erotic beginning...

that wanes in the longing. An excellent lament on what we once had, that we now miss terribly. Very good...

jim : )

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Greatly...

...enjoyed this...."What I wouldn't do for that sweat to be me"!!!...That opening is a strong hook, and forced me to read closely.

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