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by Toward A Word

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LiarLiarover 19 years ago
You have been reviewed

This poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread on the forum.

DustystarDustystarover 19 years ago
Truly

showing the pilgrim heart on your sleeve.

I loved this:

pleading for pain

if only to feel something

anything

pity them

pity himself

sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
confused but look it

This read had me getting closer to the puter w/ each

line. I don't fully understand it, but the words

and stlye make it a page turner.

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