by tungtied2u
The words, the metaphor, the form; not a loose end in sight! Great work, TT2U.
All tied up in knots, yet not..
Great one. A lot of depth and imagery.
Loved this one~~!!
* flying bands of sinew and skin *..
Wow ~~ great line there..
More please..~!!
*Smiles*
I like how this one started with "entertaining the thought" and I got this idea of having a party for the brain which is exactly what you did. great use of sounds to get your messages across
..when I saw it - somewhere - in the folds of the PDF and I still love it. So many clever metaphors and great lines - there's even some tasty alliteration. A hefty 5.