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by Senna Jawa

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AngelineAngelineover 19 years ago
Vintage You!

Brief and precise and meaningful.

LiarLiarover 19 years ago
Your poem is reviewed

...in the New Poems thread over at the forum.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
Wow

this troubles me, acts as a signal...

"sincere exchanges are less sincere"

I like this space, instead of a line break

"trifles from here"

WOW

"color of the cat-cloud"

I was wondering, if you couldn't come up with another word instead of flown, something more cat like

"flown across your forehead"

...acts as a signal, that I better pay attention, especially after a title like that.

It is tough to get so many comments out, in something so short - in awe

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SILENCE

the most sincere form of respect, TK U MLJ LV NV

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