by Senna Jawa
this troubles me, acts as a signal...
"sincere exchanges are less sincere"
I like this space, instead of a line break
"trifles from here"
WOW
"color of the cat-cloud"
I was wondering, if you couldn't come up with another word instead of flown, something more cat like
"flown across your forehead"
...acts as a signal, that I better pay attention, especially after a title like that.
It is tough to get so many comments out, in something so short - in awe