by eagleyez
your rhyme is as casual and alluring as the words you arrange into a catching flow down easy
this spoke of a dreamer reaching..always reaching! graceful and gentle flow a very lovely read.
has been a wonderful day for dreaming. this is just marvelous ee ...you dont post often, but when you do, wow, its really worth reading and this wouldve gotten an E from me, yep, maybe 2 :)
you could put all your poems together and the images would make an overall theme--trees, oceans, the natural world, the way the pieces fit, and always, that western feeling of largeness, openess.
And I understand this poem. As you know. :)
When I read the title I kind of filled in the blank and came up with "when the trees are full of monkeys." I know there's something wrong with me. I feel bad about it now that I've read your lovely poem. I'll give it a 5 right now and that should shoo the monkeys away.