All Comments on 'when the trees are full'

by eagleyez

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SeattleRainSeattleRainalmost 20 years ago
as usual you make it *feel* so easy

your rhyme is as casual and alluring as the words you arrange into a catching flow down easy

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Very....

...nice read....gentle and flowing. Really lovely.

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
very nice!

this spoke of a dreamer reaching..always reaching! graceful and gentle flow a very lovely read.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
today

has been a wonderful day for dreaming. this is just marvelous ee ...you dont post often, but when you do, wow, its really worth reading and this wouldve gotten an E from me, yep, maybe 2 :)

AngelineAngelinealmost 20 years ago
Well Eagleyez,

you could put all your poems together and the images would make an overall theme--trees, oceans, the natural world, the way the pieces fit, and always, that western feeling of largeness, openess.

And I understand this poem. As you know. :)

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
monkeys

When I read the title I kind of filled in the blank and came up with "when the trees are full of monkeys." I know there's something wrong with me. I feel bad about it now that I've read your lovely poem. I'll give it a 5 right now and that should shoo the monkeys away.

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