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NEVER let this poem end -- so beautiful, so touching. I'm a sucker for "purty" words and phrases, so your "mewling with pleasure" tugged on my heartstrings. At the end, I wished your verse could go on and on, with you professing your love for your SO (or the character's love for his SO) and with your contempt for the inanities of life.

i wrote that poem for your husband, Anonymous. just discovered i can do that... flit in and out of people's lives. (distressing, sometimes) (q.v. Mark Strand: "The Untelling")