All Comments on 'Who, Me?'

the conversational tones you use in your poetry. It makes the scene live, in my view.

I get the image of a husband playing bad when the wife has some of her friends over and the spirit of the group is rattled. That's what poetry is about, mostly creating an image, a feeling, not so much the telling of a story.

In such insatable mysteries we are lost;

As a doer unknowing in the second act-

Only in our afters do we know the cost,

When our fictions have become our fact