All Comments on 'Wild Flowers'

in this poem,and I was enjoying it so much, until I got to the word "drowned."

what a buzz kill. you have talent, but you need to be more diigent in editing.

good work :)

On this cccccold day, this feels so very warm and carefree, despite a couple whoopsies. One's been pointed out, the other is barefoot {a single word}, though poetic license could be permitted for that linebreak to create a certain image.

Those are some wild flowers, but make sure you don't turn your back on the deceitful dandelions.

"Drowned" tripped me up too, and there are some odd punctuations that threw me (but maybe that's just me). Still, this is lovely stuff--gave me a little preview of springtime on a cold snowy morning. :-)

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review Thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum. Thanks for the read!

Well I missed every typo and carried on flying through the dandelions right beside you!

You're a young spirit Peaches ... you will ever be so !!