- Erotic Poetry
- Willow
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I am your willow swaying
in summer
my tendrils dance seductively
for you
come beneath me
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREalmost 16 years agoIf by "natural", my friend LeBroZ meant the seductive power of the women in our world I couldn't agree with him more... Another delicate yet powerfully erotic poem. Quickly becoming addicted.
One little comment -you might have gotten an even stronger impactwithout using the advervb: "seductively", in a way that would have showed it ( perhaps 'my tendrils dance around you'?). Just an idea.
