All Comments on 'With Crystal Clarity...'

who is "they?"

are you certain that THEY have not seen more than you give THEM credit for...

are you alone in your depth of vision, I wonder.

I wonder if your words

unwritten

are instead, hidden.

waiting to blame the seeker for lack of trying to find?

a good poem inspires readers to ask questions

I have asked the same as you

but realize it is not Their responsibility for

wanting to dig into my unspoken meaning

my cloaked reasons my well intended turn of phrase

that drives them to turning the other way

I apologize this comment is more about me than it is about you, but then again, we poets get this way sometimes :)

keep on writing,

someone will understand

the words you do not say

and it will be magic.

first or again

we have to believe this, don't we?

who offers his words to the public, you should strive to make your words and readers connect.

*no thermometer rating

never change the way you write.

IS NOT WHAT YOU SEEN. tk u mlj lv nv