All Comments on 'With You'

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sweet !

I like the feel of this sweet love ~

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
short and sweet

nice dedication

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

Such a simply profound statement...

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
last three lines....

is all i need someday, and the whole piece is wonderful.....nicely done.......don

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
The earth moves

and mountains shy

to other places

with words

such as the.se.

-sGp-

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