All Comments on 'Would he?'

I like how you write: "Here it is, this is how I see it."

It isn't full of fancy words, or way out images that take

an hour or so to figure out, if ever. We are the same

in that we write to our hearts and souls not our IQ's.

I have preach enough, WOULD HE? could loose a few words here

or there, but I found it as hard and life like as the door.

sand

*Grins*

Ya had to know this one would Shoot off ~!! I love this. You paint the picture, and let us * feel * your indecision .. Nice form too ~

More Please ~

Great imagery of her standing

at the sacrificial door

the ravages of time and torture impact on it

as she prepares to knock

alluding to so strongly her fated doom within

damn - no wonder they never show

for a second wild night of sin