All Comments on 'Wouldst Thou'

The poem itself is nicely written, and a pleasant read, but why the anachronistic language? It does little more than accentuate the contrivance of some of the rhymes.

I would have put 100% but that looks like I'm kissin ass.

I really did love this poem.

I personally thought that the anachronistic language made the meaning and tenderness of the words a lot stronger.