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Click hereAm I a writer?
I like to think so.
But when the words won’t come out,
And when my story lacks flow,
How can I claim to be a master,
And let my talent show?
My words stumble, fumble, and falter.
My grammar is appalling.
My spelling leaves me balling.
My passion wants to soar.
My words want to roar.
To show the world my ideas,
And dismiss my writing fears,
Is my one true goal.
In my head there is this hole
Which is the place were my ability seems to go.
Is this any good?
I doubt it.
My passion wants to soar.
My words want to roar.
2 very powerful lines that I really enjoyed
I would like you to know I reread this piece over and over great talent
Conveys the doubts and uncertainty all of us writers often have about our ability to produce good material.
Writing sucks from the aspect of one's ego. You have some good lines in here. Once again, I would suggest a little paring down and maybe breaking it up into stanzas, strophes or whatever you want to call them. Once again, the hardest part of editing is trying not to wad it up and throw it in the trash can, or at least it is for me.
Bravo!!!
Love the deliberate typos. ( I hope they were deliberate lol ;)~~~~~ )
Great job, hon.
I don't know what I expected from your poetry, but this wasn't it. I seldom like rhyming pieces, but this one was interesting. ~Imp
I can relate to those fears.I believe that every writer has fears and you express yours beautifully.
I like this line: "My words stumble, fumble, and falter."
I do have a question about this line: "My spelling leaves me balling."
Do you mean balling as in sex, or did you mean bawling as in crying? Either way works, but bawling makes more sense.