All Comments on 'Writen fear'

I like this line: "My words stumble, fumble, and falter."

I do have a question about this line: "My spelling leaves me balling."

Do you mean balling as in sex, or did you mean bawling as in crying? Either way works, but bawling makes more sense.

I can relate to those fears.I believe that every writer has fears and you express yours beautifully.

I don't know what I expected from your poetry, but this wasn't it. I seldom like rhyming pieces, but this one was interesting. ~Imp

Bravo!!!

Love the deliberate typos. ( I hope they were deliberate lol ;)~~~~~ )

Great job, hon.

I so relate to this! Great job!

Writing sucks from the aspect of one's ego. You have some good lines in here. Once again, I would suggest a little paring down and maybe breaking it up into stanzas, strophes or whatever you want to call them. Once again, the hardest part of editing is trying not to wad it up and throw it in the trash can, or at least it is for me.

Conveys the doubts and uncertainty all of us writers often have about our ability to produce good material.

Just let go baby.

just let it all out... ranting is good for you, I think.

My passion wants to soar.

My words want to roar.

2 very powerful lines that I really enjoyed

I would like you to know I reread this piece over and over great talent