by HLA246
Not bad at all. It's a powerful poem and "yes" is a very powerful word.
Yes, yes, yes! This poem is so powerful and sweet at the same time. It totally summarizes what I would like a certain someone to know. *sigh*
For your first submission this isn't bad at all. In fact I liked it a lot! Your punctuation needs a bit of work though cause you put commas in places they shouldn't be...unless it was supposed to be like that for some reason. Nonetheless, kudos to you.