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by quietpoly

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22about 20 years ago
A potent statement

in simple words. So soft and human.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
I liked the play on the watery metaphor

life so woven with his presence, ultimately death in his absence. And yet a look to the sky searching. nicely done.

jim : )

SavgeWolfSavgeWolfabout 20 years ago
ah....

I read your words as well as felt them. There really isn't anything you can count on as true but nature. Camels in the desert...thunderstorm from heaven...we are all on a long search, travel, all we can ever know to be true is nature and ourselves. Kudos Sophia...I love your work. It's innocent with observations, yet knowing.

sandspikesandspikealmost 20 years ago
smooth

and deep like a fine drink of the good stuff. I like this

poem and imagery very much.

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