- Erotic Poetry
- you are My...An Ode to a submissive
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you are My...
I am your Dominant
you are my submissive
I am your desire's Deep
you are my Fantasy's leap
I am your Pleasure
you are my Control measure
I am your Provider of pain
you are my Soul's chosen gain
I am your pushed Edge
you are my promised pledge
I am your heart's Joy
you are my whips play toy
I am your Giver of subspace
you are my Imagination's starting place
I am your Verbal Command
you are my obeyed demand
I am your Decision Maker
You are my command taker
I am your Comfort zone
you are my welcome home
I am your Good Night Kiss
you are my evening's bliss
I am your never Alone
you are my path home
I am your Dominant
you are my submissive
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 8 years agoThe give and take, reception and offering of your words have captured the moment of acceptance of each of those roles.
xx Matt
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI like seeing both sides, submissive and dominant, in tube same poem. A most enjoyable poem, I especially like " I am your pushed edge, you are my promised pledge'. Excellent x
JWrenover 9 years agoThe submissive's role is perfectly explained, none sharper than:
'I am your Pleasure
you are my Control measure'
Well done.
Apple_of_Edenover 9 years agoAuthor@Ashesh9: Sorry the poem didn't do it for you. Aesthetics as with beauty is all in the eye of the beholder. I'll try harder to meet your needs next time. Thanks for reading my postings and for your comments.
@TwisterOliver: Thank you for your poem. I enjoyed it. Short, sweet, and to the point. I appreciate your taking the time to comment.
