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All Comments on 'You, My Addiction'

by RhymeFairy

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Many FeathersMany Feathersover 15 years ago
As always

You have insight and depth to your words. I'm admittedly addicted to you myself too.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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You could probably eliminate a few gerunds (ing words). These lines really stand out: preserving pickled memories with amazing accuracy. Your smell I inherited...

sacksackover 15 years ago
You are such a wordsmith.......

'wordsmith"= master at juggling words. This poem is evocative, dangerous, and will resonate in my memory....thanks for sharing!

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