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by Wants2benaughty

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 9 years ago
Nicely done

I felt the spirit and sentiments you express clearly. I would have broken up the line:

"You find yourself unworthy of redemption" or just left it "you find yourself unworthy" for a smoother read.

Wants2benaughtyWants2benaughtyover 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

Yes, it would make for a better read. However, I wrote this for a special friend. I used his words :)

Thank you for the feedback

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I love it!!!

Wow. Just, wow!! You are a very talented writer!

Wants2benaughtyWants2benaughtyover 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you

It is my favorite so far :)

Thank you for taking the time to comment!

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