by Mahir
Great job, Mahir, I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem and I hope you continue writing poetry and stories. God Bless!
HarlemKnight a.k.a Nature Boy
I loved this! The only thing that would have made it better would be if you had began the poem with the same verse you ended it with. But whatever, it is still a wonderful tit poem! I gladly gave you a 5.
~ maria