by Bill Dada
First I enjoyed the humor and playfulness. I enjoy the play on (early) 'to bed' on one hand and 'Tibet' on the other which could give a whole new meaning to 'rise'. I come to realize that a wise Zenist (a Zen -person) would most likely adopt this text of observation ...
Cute.. I smiled and loved the wit.. no worries on the not poetry line.. wonder what they would say about one lined haikus??? mentioned in the sunday reviews..
du lac
laughing, true to zen wisdom,
say little and mean alot ...
excellent wording!