by My Erotic Tale
Breathless beauty reaching towards heaven. Serene, making one to reach upwards. Emotionally touching.
Thank you,
Satin and Lace
HORAY!!! An other ZMP!!! I like them the BEST!! Thankyou ZMA!!! I think friends and others who help IVY to!!!
in your zen thread, and liked it there as much as here. very nice, art, very nice.
I love your ZMP poetry Art
and I have to say I think
this is my favourite, it's
beautiful and graceful and I
know I will keep coming back
to it. Lovely work.
Thanks
~ Jenn
Very nice poem Art.
Show me the way.
Lead me ... guide
Heaven bound
Till we reach ... the sky~
Loved your wording. Very thought provoking.
Kinda makes one look to the inner *me*
Loved this one~!!
and this is my favorite here:
Some have thorns
and some are poison I warn.
Their Roots touched hell, is a given.
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great piece........don
tons of depth and wonder...as usual ..you wow me...smiles/blue
that you are, without a doubt, THE zen God!!! WOW!!! My lower jaw is still resting on the keyboard after reading this poem and getting in the way of Me writing the comment. Okay, its been moved... DOUBLE WOW!!!
VERY impressed Vixxx
Was chatting with Wanton earlier tonight and this small piece came up. Now I see she's stolen my thunder. A superb piece with subtle metaphors, so well composed that it enhances vision as it gently extols, "See this."
Many thanks