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cracking poem Art,

really beautiful,

I especially loved

Then dives with delight

embracing the splash

the deathly collide

when dew and earth clash.

I love how you find beauty

in the simplest of things.

~ J

"It races to the edge

of a leaf or a rim

holds for a moment

calculating the wind

Then dives with delight

embracing the splash"

These lines put you in the driver's seat of a dew drop. Good job.

That is so great!!! How do see such thinks that I dont??? WOW dewdrops going to GOD byr falling!!! Zen Master Art your so ZEN!!! Thankyou so much!!!

as said a wonderful write Art... ty so much

zen zen zen.. lol.

falling now

Du~

Art, this was very cute and witty, I am amazed by your neverending magic penmanship!

S~

of a leaf or a rim

holds for a moment

calculating the wind"

I just saw this in the Zen Mountain thread and just realized you posted it as new poem. Sorry I am a little slow ;)

These zen poems, I enjoy. An observation in nature, something so simple has much more meaning if you are aware. And you are, Art. Nice work!

You humble us all...

~L

- like this

"the smaller it becomes

first risers to heaven"

make this poem memorable. Thank you,Uncle MET.

Tess

it is racing to heaven!" is the epitome of zen awareness that I have ever contemplated! Art, you never cease to amaze Me with these pearls of nature's wisdom and this is one of your best. The Du {and the rest of us here}have been dewdropped blessed today!<smile>

Vixxx

I read your poetry all the time but rarely comment. loved it my friend...:)

of wisdom and has just a hint of graceful as well...really nice pen...*****blue

in this piece and a nice compliment to another. and of course it has a few great lines of which has already been covered. nicely done!!....don

Really wonderful way of capturing the essence of a simple dew drop and giving it an existence all its own.

BEAUTY ALL AROUND US...thanks for reminding us all of that...

Kisses,

T

Very nice poem. I dew like nature poems.

I liked the "natures Art" hehehe....thanks Art, S.

clever Art, you have come a long way , baby!

Nin~