ZMP~ when a dew drop falls ...

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When a dew drop falls?
...that's not it at all!

It races to the edge
of a leaf or a rim
holds for a moment
calculating the wind

Then dives with delight
embracing the splash
the deathly collide
when dew and earth clash

A dew drop understands
and knows natures Art
the smaller it becomes
first risers to heaven

On an early morning mist
lies the secret dew wish
when the sun and earth kiss
arrives the dew drops lift

when a dew drop falls ...
it is racing to heaven!


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>>> 'For the Du' <<<
........(~_~).........

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Ninja NookieNinja Nookieabout 19 years ago
earth and sun kiss ... dew drop lift

clever Art, you have come a long way , baby!

Nin~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
playful

I liked the "natures Art" hehehe....thanks Art, S.

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~about 19 years ago
won DEW ful

Very nice poem. I dew like nature poems.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 19 years ago
WOW

BEAUTY ALL AROUND US...thanks for reminding us all of that...

Kisses,

T

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Outstanding!

Really wonderful way of capturing the essence of a simple dew drop and giving it an existence all its own.

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
nice flow....

in this piece and a nice compliment to another. and of course it has a few great lines of which has already been covered. nicely done!!....don

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
loads

of wisdom and has just a hint of graceful as well...really nice pen...*****blue

cookiejarcookiejarabout 19 years ago
Hey Art...

I read your poetry all the time but rarely comment. loved it my friend...:)

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
"when a dew drop falls...

it is racing to heaven!" is the epitome of zen awareness that I have ever contemplated! Art, you never cease to amaze Me with these pearls of nature's wisdom and this is one of your best. The Du {and the rest of us here}have been dewdropped blessed today!<smile>

Vixxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Lovely lines

- like this

"the smaller it becomes

first risers to heaven"

make this poem memorable. Thank you,Uncle MET.

Tess

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