All Comments on 'Zziinngg The Song of the Angler'

Good story here. A rather long write, but it didn't read that way when reading it, which was a nice surprise.

Getting better MBJ. A bit long but not a disappointment. Turns out to be much more than just a fish tale.

I liked this a lot. The last line implies 'sex comes next' to me, though perhaps I'm wrong there. Maybe it just implies 'loving relationship' and mutual indulgence. 'My angler' is a nice thought. Perhaps it's gently mocking, but it's also loving. I liked the very clear pictures and the dryness of the poem - the economy. There's no sentimentality here. There's humour underneath it. A good poem - for me, anyway.