by sensualwriter
well written and interesting but where does it come from and where does itrgo?
I loved the story well writen, sexy and leaves you wanting more. So finish or better yet cont. the story.
that was great. it was the beginnings of a great story...keep it up!! when Sara visited her family...i almost cried. just perfect...sadness and then euphoric joy..if only for a few moments. i need more!!!
i didnt like the part of the family dying but the rest was good...
you are going to finish the story right?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
A story that is at once touching and stimulating, Much enjoyed.
Sad. I almost cried.
The scene in her bedroom is very natural and again, I like the flow, very good sequencing. Organic.
... coming = that it was going to be a visit to the graves of Sara's family.
What happened next was 'predictable' BUT life-affirming none the less.
What greater could one friend do for/with her closest friend than that?
Xtianity has taken away the delight of just sharing the joy of sex.
There are millions of people of both sexes who are withering away from the want of close intimate contact.
Contact that is there, but is forbidden since 'God wouldn't approve."
Who needs drugs when sex is greater than anyone of them can ever be?
Make LOVE, not war, money, hate, .....