by Spartan22
This is really good. I especially look forward to more of Kaylee's self-realization about how she doesn't like the person she has become or the crowd she hangs out with that can't see her being any other way. Even if no sex happens between Kaylee and Luke, I will continue reading.
I'm really liking the fact that you are spending quality time on character development and leave the sex until much later after a good buildup. Anyway, Kaylee comes across as your typical shallow beauty queen. Now, she's afraid to admit that she's intrigued by Luke because of peer pressure and how they view one person as better than another. It will be interesting to see how she overcomes those barriers both around her as well inside herself.
Terrific and heart warming series! Amazing character intersection. I love it! I don't mind that it doesn't contain any sex, in fact I wish it wouldn't have any.
Great story. This is a gem and a nice change of read from the usual stuff here in the site!
Hard lessons are the best-learned lessons. That said, she'd better put it right! :-/
i dont envision luke to be the kinda guy who would cry. i think he must be used to all this so it just doesnt add up.
I'll be honest i was expecting some action. Turns out, I almost cried too.
Bravo with the development or whatever this was :)
Am hoping that the reader warning after Chapter 1 that this story is a "loser" or worse at the end is not true. At this point it is so good that as a reader I have to continue. Either way, intend to go back to Chapter 1 and either confirm or deny for other readers.
peer pressure and cliques some revel in it others are crushed by it. good story