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u can be more creative. i could see through it at the begginning.

Great story!I shot a load all over the floor as I read this. Thanks for the turn on.

loved it, jacked off and came all over myself, wonderful

would love for someone to suck me off again

jacked off all over myself, wish i had someone sucking my

cock now

i just cum up my mates ass after reading this story it was great keep it up

This story is a cum-fest!

I shot a huge load all over myself from reading your story. Made me wish I had a cock to suck.

THIS is a story that is so vivid, I cum everytime I read it... MORE plz! BTW: I'm a straight female ~ That was HAWT!!!

as i read this story it made me so hot an hard i started to jackoff as i read an blew a big load in my hand witch i ate

as i read your story i got so hot an horny i came all over myself i scooped it up an ate it sure wish i had someone to suck me so i could suck him

Great story... I'm usually not so much into guys kissing, but the kissing described here actually gave me a powerful erection!!!

Great writing!

I DREAM OF SUCKING COCKSS AND JERK OFF AS I READ ABOUT THEM BEING SUCKED AND WISH I WERE THE ONE SUCKING THE COCKS

that was sad, but real, vivid and definitely erotic. I like your writing and I'd like to see... well, read... more!

It wasn't particularly hot or exciting but it was clever and sweet. Which is also just as good.

I got lost...

couldnt keep track of this.? its all over the place.

I enjoyed your story very much. Though it would have been a bit better had you given a heads up to the little change in scene. But it wouldn't have been the same if you had. I personally enjoyed it a lot. Your writing style and story-telling are really good. Great job!

I'm masturbating on webcam as I read your story and shot off a load, now I'm being fucked by my lover and it feels fantastic.