All Comments on '1983: Deeper into the Taboo Zone'

by gggsss1962

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
simply superb

your explanation of love and lust is simply superb keep it up man.i hope u do write more of ur experiences after all once a..... always a........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
GR8

really brilliant awesome loved it made me cum again and again

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
wonderful

man that was truly wonderful

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
really top-rate

they really took it all the way in this one and the descriptions were superb. this is really a wonderful piece of writing in the interactions between the two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
OUTSTANDING,

I'll say it again, "Outstanding"!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great

ausome but u should have someone proof read it

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Perfect!

Simply wonderful. It was just that beautiful. If only the cousin got pregnant from their lovemaking, it would be outstanding!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wow!

like it so much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
WOW

COULDN'T STOP READING. NEEDS AN ENDING. HOPE YOU WILL WRITE IT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wow

That was like the best story i have ever heard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Perfect

Finally a story with a STORY, not just mindless sex. One of the few "I can't stop reading story."

Major props. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome

A story i was waiting to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
One of the Greatest

This + the first story (1982) together makes most likely the best i have ever read, and I spend a lot of time on this and other similar sites, please post more. I must know how it ends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic

This was a wonderfully well written story with a marvelous balance of sexuality and sensuality. I wait in eager anticipation for the next edition of this series. Thank you so much for your work, it was absolutely riveting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
amazing story wright more

please wright more to this story. this has been the most amazing peace of liturature i have ever read. the excitment of there doomed love i want to see it turn out good. T-T

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
yo... keep it going...

This is awesome.... don't stop now...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
cousin fucking is great

Cousns should fuck each other. It's fun and great exercise. Keep screwig her. Shoot your cum into her and see if you can get her pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Cousinfuck

Cousin fucking is the best thing I've EVER done

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WOW

Hey Very Nice I loved the descriptions of both the physical and emotional of both parties. But especially the physical. Great Story. Hope to read more fom you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
write more please

Please write another one please i want to find out what happened to these people have they had a another time with each other whats going with them please write more please i loved it it really made me horny and very excited !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love It

This story is almost like whats going on with me & my cuzn. But I have his baby & I don't regret anything. Keep writing, I want to read more!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

It looks like the two cousins are in love with each. Please keep writing and tell us what happen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Grammar

Work on your grammar people!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
omg

what a great story.

I have recently had a great experience with my own cousin. I am secretly hoping he would be keen on another go. Unfortunately we both have significant others, so i am unsure if he would want to. He didnt fuck me with his cock, only his fingers and mouth. I would have loved it if he had gone all the way with me.

After reading this i am totally floored and horny for him. Its so unfair.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
bahahaha

man, story of my life. two cousins bedded and one consistently. not without protection and rarely fucking but no less similar.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
thoughts

great beautiful story with much passion

asanka1979asanka1979over 9 years ago
wow

the same experience i had with my girlfriend, but she has my baby, and our kissing was deeper and more passionate

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
EXCELLENT WRITING

You may not be widely read in English speaking places because exact translation of verbs and certain word usage is out of balance with how we are taught to read and write. But, this is a very well written piece. Like "Old English," it requires a bit of thinking on the part of the reader. I enjoy this mental exercise to prevent contracting a mush brain syndrome.

I'm looking forward to reading your other work.

11-2015

RanDog025RanDog025almost 6 years ago
IT WAS AN OKAY STORY

NO ENDING AS IS A COMMON THING HERE AT ILLITEROTICA! I GUESS PEOPLE HAVE THEIR REASONS WHY THEY DON'T FINISH, BUT THIS AUTHOR HAS BEEN INACTIVE FOR 11 YEARS. OH WELL!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
why do you people end this way

Every time I read these stories the end up not done. Wish you would continue by finishing the story. What happens to the cousins. Do they end up married to each other or what?

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