by gggsss1962
your explanation of love and lust is simply superb keep it up man.i hope u do write more of ur experiences after all once a..... always a........
they really took it all the way in this one and the descriptions were superb. this is really a wonderful piece of writing in the interactions between the two.
Simply wonderful. It was just that beautiful. If only the cousin got pregnant from their lovemaking, it would be outstanding!
Finally a story with a STORY, not just mindless sex. One of the few "I can't stop reading story."
Major props. Keep up the good work.
This + the first story (1982) together makes most likely the best i have ever read, and I spend a lot of time on this and other similar sites, please post more. I must know how it ends.
This was a wonderfully well written story with a marvelous balance of sexuality and sensuality. I wait in eager anticipation for the next edition of this series. Thank you so much for your work, it was absolutely riveting.
please wright more to this story. this has been the most amazing peace of liturature i have ever read. the excitment of there doomed love i want to see it turn out good. T-T
Cousns should fuck each other. It's fun and great exercise. Keep screwig her. Shoot your cum into her and see if you can get her pregnant.
Hey Very Nice I loved the descriptions of both the physical and emotional of both parties. But especially the physical. Great Story. Hope to read more fom you.
Please write another one please i want to find out what happened to these people have they had a another time with each other whats going with them please write more please i loved it it really made me horny and very excited !!!
This story is almost like whats going on with me & my cuzn. But I have his baby & I don't regret anything. Keep writing, I want to read more!!!!!
It looks like the two cousins are in love with each. Please keep writing and tell us what happen.
what a great story.
I have recently had a great experience with my own cousin. I am secretly hoping he would be keen on another go. Unfortunately we both have significant others, so i am unsure if he would want to. He didnt fuck me with his cock, only his fingers and mouth. I would have loved it if he had gone all the way with me.
After reading this i am totally floored and horny for him. Its so unfair.
man, story of my life. two cousins bedded and one consistently. not without protection and rarely fucking but no less similar.
the same experience i had with my girlfriend, but she has my baby, and our kissing was deeper and more passionate
You may not be widely read in English speaking places because exact translation of verbs and certain word usage is out of balance with how we are taught to read and write. But, this is a very well written piece. Like "Old English," it requires a bit of thinking on the part of the reader. I enjoy this mental exercise to prevent contracting a mush brain syndrome.
I'm looking forward to reading your other work.
11-2015
NO ENDING AS IS A COMMON THING HERE AT ILLITEROTICA! I GUESS PEOPLE HAVE THEIR REASONS WHY THEY DON'T FINISH, BUT THIS AUTHOR HAS BEEN INACTIVE FOR 11 YEARS. OH WELL!
Every time I read these stories the end up not done. Wish you would continue by finishing the story. What happens to the cousins. Do they end up married to each other or what?