All Comments on '23 Minutes'

Man, the end was pretty sad!

But it was hot. Totally.

Love a quickie. Even if in a day dream.

I like... it just needs a few grammar things fixed.

I haven't read a dream story in a while. :)

I also liked how he stayed quite for all of it.

Didn't see the ending coming. Good job

interesting story, but WHY can't you spell "to" properly, it made the story feel somewhat disjointed trying to read it.