- Romance
- 3: Scars Remain Ch. 03
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All Comments on '3: Scars Remain Ch. 03'
by Spartan22
- 14 Comments
Anonymousover 10 years agoThank you for continuing! I felt this was really short, can't wait to see what happens. I'm really anticipating the next parts .
Anonymousover 10 years agoI felt like I was right there.
Your stories are great. I check everyday for a new one in this series.
Please keep writing
Anonymousover 10 years agoYour stories are great. Can't wait to see what happens next.Hope to see chapter 4 SOON...
Anonymousover 10 years ago5+* One of the best stories I have read here for a long time.
Depopuloover 10 years agoStill a decent series, but the religious overtone is getting a bit disquieting, considering the way the main characters have played out.
Good writer, but I simply think this series has been drug out much further than it really needed to be and its starting to show the stretch marks. Overall still a decent cohesive story that probably should have been shortened by a few chapters 3/5 on this chapter, 4/5 on the overall storyline.
Anonymousover 10 years agoOne big eyeroll with the dads conversation enjoyed the rest though
Anonymousover 10 years agosome other people have said that this series is to long, but I love it and love that it is really long 5++++++++!
sennodenalmost 2 years agoI'll have to agree with what some people say. I don't mind religion most of the time - but in this story Ryan is discrediting himself by saying god healed him, not that he helped himself through his own efforts. And no way do I respect someone putting anyone before their family, not even whoever they worship.
Anonymous5 months agoThe whole waiting until marriage for sex was a bit over-the-top. Come on really? It's absurd in this day and age for intelligent people like that to obey such archaic practices. The religious elements were woven in a bit too much in this story. I mean it was nothing extreme but it did have an effect on some plot elements, which was a tad annoying. The PTSD thing is way over the top. Seems like it was used a cheap plot device to further extend the drama and drag the story out.
