All Comments on '30 Love Ch. 01'

As the title of my comments say, a nice story with an excellent build-up in the story line. The sexual tension and anticipation of the two characters was a wonderful change of pace from the usual story.

You also managed to not have the glaring spelling and syntax errors that detract so greatly from the enjoyment of other stories. A hearty thank you, and and a fervent wish that you continue writing.

and a lot of fun.

looking forward to Ch. 02

I do not usually read in this section, but since I saw the next chapter as an romance, I decided to start reading from the beginning. It has been a pleasant surprise, the development of history has been beautiful and elegant, without any contempt to the members of the couple, I have seen passion, lust and desire, but also respect.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.